Saturday, January 29, 2011

Chapter 5

Sickness had struck ThunderClan.

It had started when Seapelt started coughing.
“Whitecough,” Briarleaf diagnosed. Seapelt was confined to the medicine den so it wouldn’t spread. But soon, Whirlpaw, Breezepaw, and Brushkit were all coughing,
“It’s a tough leaf bare,” meowed Crescentstar. “Prey is scarce and so are herbs. ThunderClan will have to struggle to pull through without losing any cats.”
Mistkit had insisted on helping Briarleaf treat the sick cats, but Briarleaf had sent her back to the nursery.
“It’s too dangerous,” she meowed sternly. “You could catch the sickness. What would your mother say?”
At nightfall, Briarleaf collapsed into her nest. I can’t wait for newleaf, she thought. She drifted off into a deep, dreamless sleep.

The next morning, Briarleaf woke before the sun. She told her sick patients to chew some tansy. Seapelt was looking a bit better, and Breezepaw wasn’t coughing as much.
“I want to go back to training!” she whined. The little apprentice was getting antsy.
“I’m sorry, Breezepaw.” Briarleaf replied. “But we can’t afford for you to spread the sickness.” Breezepaw slumped back into her nest, discouraged. Briarleaf sighed and went back preparing herbs. Raincloud walked into her den, looking worried.
“Brushkit is no better today,” she fretted. “Will she be strong enough to survive leaf bare?” Hope and anxiety filled her gaze.
“Brushkit is a strong, and old enough to eat prey,” Briarleaf replied. “We must make sure she is healthy and eating and getting exercise. That will help her shake off the chest infection. All we can do other than that really is pray to StarClan.” Raincloud dipped her head and left.

Ducking into the nursery, Briarleaf spotted Brushkit lying in her nest, sleeping. Her littermates were playing quietly, tossing a moss ball back and forth. Briarleaf had never seen kits so calm before. Sunkit, Mistkit, and Whisperkit were also sleeping beside Shiningpelt. Briarleaf gave Raincloud some feverfew and tansy to give to Brushkit when she woke up.  The clan had never been so quiet. Briarleaf decided to go for a walk. As she passed the training hollow, she spotted Silverheart and Crystalfur with their apprentices. Rosepaw lunged at Almondpaw, who dived away clumsily and lunged at Rosepaw. But Briarleaf could tell that she timed the jump wrong and landed a few whisker lengths away from Rosepaw. Even though Briarleaf knew that Rose paw knew the leap failed, Rosepaw backed away in terror as Almondpaw fell to the ground. Briarleaf sighed. These weren’t exactly a very successful bunch of apprentices.

Shalepaw, on the other hand, seemed much stronger in all areas. He was a brilliant hunter and fighter, even though he was around the same age as the two she-cats. Almondpaw seemed so absent sometimes, she never aimed her blows right and wasn’t very good at catching prey either. Rosepaw wasn’t much better. She didn’t seem as absent and forced herself to concentrate, but she seemed to lack a huge bit of confidence. She seemed scared of going into the forest, and seemed to crumble when training with her mentor.
At this rate, there’ll be no warriors left, thought Briarleaf, crossly.

Briarleaf went down to the lake, which was now frozen over. The cold breeze ruffled her fur, causing her to shiver. It was cold, but it was a beautiful day.
“Hi, Briarleaf!” chirped a voice. Briarleaf turned around to see Shalepaw running towards her, a fat mouse in his jaws. Briarleaf nodded at Shalepaw, admiring his catch.
“That ought to feed half the clan!” she complimented. Shalepaw purred as he dropped his catch on the ground. Then his face turned serious.
“Briarleaf,” he mewed. “Will Whirlpaw be okay?” Briarleaf sighed.
“Shalepaw,” she said. “Whirlpaw is a strong cat. But if his chest infection gets worse, there isn’t much I can do.” She looked at the young apprentice, who was pawing the ground discouragingly. “You two are close, aren’t you?” Shalepaw nodded.
“We’re best friends,” he mewed. “We played together in the nursery, and we’ll always be beside each other, even when we’re warriors.” Briarleaf’s heart ached. Shalepaw had so much faith in Whirlpaw, faith that would never separate the two of them. There was no doubt he would make a phenomenal warrior.
“Do you remember that black cat?” Shalepaw’s words broke her out of her thoughts. “The rogue cat who moved into our clan?” Briarleaf felt the world spin as she once again thought of her friend.
“Stardust?” she said. Shalepaw nodded.
“You were pretty close to her too, right?”
“Yes,” she meowed, struggling to keep a straight face. “Yes I was.”
Shalepaw nodded, understanding. And suddenly, Briarleaf understood too. She purred.
“Well, thanks for listening,” said Shalepaw. He picked up his mouse and ran off. Briarleaf blinked and headed back to camp.

“Briarleaf!” cried Raincloud. “Brushkit can’t breathe!”
A few days had passed and Seapelt and Breezepaw had returned to their regular duties. Whirlpaw was still slowly recovering in the medicine den, but it was Brushkit who Briarleaf really feared for.

Briarleaf grabbed some tansy and feverfew and rushed to the nursery. Shiningpelt had taken the other kits outside so there would be more room in the nursery. Briarleaf gave some tansy to Brushkit. “Chew this,” she instructed. Brushkit chewed the leaves and made a face.
“Yuck!” she spat. “Can’t you make them taste better?” Briarleaf sighed.
“I can try,” she meowed. “But just eat them for now. You’ll feel better later.” Raincloud glanced at her, relieved.

Briarleaf ducked out of the nursery. A freezing wind had started to blow and snowflakes were falling. Shivering, Briarleaf made her way to her den. Peeking out of the entrance of her den, Briarleaf watched the swirling white scene, unblinking.

Later that night, Briarleaf settled into her nest, sheltered from the piercing leafbare cold. Newleaf, where are you?, she thought.

The next morning, Briarleaf stood in her den, preparing some herbs for Brushkit. Shalepaw slipped in, shaking snowflakes from his pelt.

“Shalepaw, what happened to you?” Briarleaf purred with amusement. “You look like you went for a swim in the snow banks.” Shalepaw’s ears twitched.
“Breezepaw pushed me into the snow,” he grumbled. Then he looked up at Briarleaf’s face and brightened up. “Well, at least her pelt is whiter than mine.” Shalepaw purred.
“She’s whiter than you in the first place,” Briarleaf teased. Bending down over her herbs, Briarleaf gathered up some borage and feverfew for Brushkit and some chamomile for the other kits in case they caught sickness too. Then, with Shalepaw at her tail, she headed to the nursery.

“Here,” Briarleaf handed the herbs to Raincloud. “If Brushkit starts burning up, give these to her. And I mixed them with nectar so they’ll taste better,” she added.
“Thanks Briarleaf,” meowed Raincloud. “If there’s anyone who can cure Brushkit, it’s you.” Briarleaf shifted her paws in embarrassment and headed out.

“Briarleaf,” greeted Crescentstar as she met her outside the nursery. “I’d like you to come to the gathering tonight.” Briarleaf dipped her head.
“Thank you, Crescentstar.” Despite the snow, the moon was shining brightly beside the stars of Silverpelt. Crescentstar gathered a patrol and they headed off to the island. Briarleaf was happy to see Shalepaw among the patrol. The young apprentice had become good friends with Briarleaf and sometimes helped her deal with the loss of Stardust. Shalepaw walked beside Briarleaf, shivering.
“It’s so cold tonight!” he complained. Briarleaf looked down at him in amusement.
“Come on, ‘paw,” she teased. “You’ll have to deal with worse conditions when you’re a warrior.” Shalepaw glared at her jokingly but didn’t say anything.

When they got to the island, Shalepaw spotted two WindClan apprentices, one fluffy grey she-cat and one dark pelted tom. Shalepaw bounded off to meet them.
“Mintpaw!” he called. The grey apprentice looked up.
“Shalepaw!” she purred as she touched noses with him. The dark apprentice grunted, obviously not happy about his presence. Mintpaw nudged him sternly.
“Don’t mind Darkpaw,” she told Shalepaw. “He’s in a grumpy mood tonight. Probably because of the cold.” Darkpaw glared at her but said nothing. Briarleaf turned away from the apprentices and went to sit with the rest of the medicine cats.
“Greetings, Briarleaf,” Shardfur greeted warmly. The WindClan medicine cat was looking thinner than usual, most likely because of the prey scarce leafbare. All the rabbits must be hiding from the cold, Briarleaf thought.

Crescentstar stood on the Great Oak with the other leaders. She let out a yowl to signify that the gathering was starting. Jaggedstar, the ShadowClan leader stepped forward.
“All is well is ShadowClan,” he meowed. “We are surviving the cold and we are not starving much more than any other clan.” Murmurs of approval rose from the ShadowClan cats. “And we have a new warrior,” Jaggedstar announced. “Beetlefur!” Briarleaf cheered along with everyone else. She got a glimpse of the young warrior, sitting proudly beside his clanmates. Jaggedstar stepped back and Greystar stepped forward.
“RiverClan has suffered from the cold leafbare,” she said. “The streams have frozen over, making it difficult to catch fish. But we have been working on breaking through the ice, and soon we will be able to catch fish again. Other than that, RiverClan is doing well.” Crescentstar stepped forward next. “ThunderClan is also doing well,” she mewed. “We have plenty of prey, despite the cold weather, and we have two new apprentices, Thistlepaw and Bubblepaw!” Everyone cheered for the young apprentices.”
Finally, the WindClan leader stepped forward.
“WindClan has been suffering greatly,” he announced. “The rabbits have been hiding from the cold and we have almost no prey.” Briarleaf blinked. I knew it, she thought.
“I request that the other clans temporarily give WindClan some of their territory to hunt in.”

Thursday, January 13, 2011

Shimmercloud At Work

Working on chapter 5. But again, I'm running thin on ideas. Hey, if you've got anything for me, feel free to comment!

Tuesday, January 4, 2011

Chapter 4

“Can’t catch me!”
“Get out of the way, furball!”
“I’m going to get you!”

Briarleaf sighed. It had been a moon since Shiningpelt’s kits opened their eyes. The nursery was filled with noise and kits playfighting. Sunkit, Mistkit, and Whisperkit were highly energetic for their small size and never backed down from the other kits. Raincloud and Lightfrost’s kits, of course, were delighted with their new playmates. Briarleaf sometimes thought that she would never get any sleep anymore.
Oh well, she thought. Kits will be kits. Juggling her medicine cat duties, visits to StarClan, and keeping an eye on Sunkit, Briarleaf somehow found time to eat and attempt to sleep. With the nursery stuffed to the brim, and nine kits and three queens to check every day, not to mention the injuries that the rest of the clan came to her with every so often, Briarleaf was constantly thinking if life would be easier with a smaller, more energetic cat by her side helping her with everything.
Have you ever thought of taking on an apprentice? Briarleaf remembered Silverheart’s words.
I haven’t before, she thought. But I definitely do now. The nursery was full of kits. Surely one of them was willing to become a medicine cat? Maybe I should talk to Crescentstar.
Just then, Briarleaf heard a yowl.
“Let all cats old enough to catch their own prey gather here under the Highledge for a clan meeting!”
Briarleaf stepped out of her den. Crescentstar was standing on the Highledge. Cats were emerging from dens and gathering. Curiously, Briarleaf sat with her clanmates.
“Cats of ThunderClan,” meowed Crescentstar. “Thistlekit and Bubblekit have reached their sixth moon, and they are ready to become apprentices. Please come forward, you two.” Squealing with excitement, Thistlekit and Bubblekit bounced up to the front of the clearing.
“Thistlekit, from now on, till you get your warrior name, you will be called Thistlepaw.”
“Thistlepaw! Thistlepaw!” Briarleaf cheered along with the rest of the clan.
“Whalefin,” Crescentstar continued. “You will be mentor to Thistlepaw. StarClan trusts you to teach him everything you know.” Whalefin stepped forward proudly and touched noses with Thistlepaw.
“Bubblekit,” said Crescentstar. “From now on, till you receive your warrior name, you will be called Bubblepaw.”
“Bubblepaw! Bubblepaw!”
“Petalfur,” said Crescentstar. “You are more than ready to take on your first apprentice. You will be mentor to Bubblepaw.” Petalfur stepped forward and touched noses with Bubblepaw. Both she-cats looked bursting with excitement. With a pang, Briarleaf remembered her mentor, Dewdrop. She remembered how happy she had been when she was made an apprentice. As the rest of the clan went to congratulate Thistlepaw and Bubblepaw, Briarleaf padded into her den, memories racing through her head.

That afternoon, Briarleaf went to see Crescentstar. She was in her den, eating a mouse.
“Hello, Briarleaf,” she meowed. “What can I do for you today?’
“Hi, Crescentstar,” said Briarleaf. “The nursery is full, and I find myself really busy these days. I thought maybe I could take on an apprentice.”  Crescentstar nodded.
“You have been our medicine cat for many moons now and you deserve an apprentice. Have you decided who you would like to take on?” Briarleaf shook her head.
“There are many kits in the nursery, but I know not every one of them is willing to follow the path of a medicine cat.” Crescentstar dipped her head.
“If you find a particular kit who you would like as an apprentice, come talk to me.” Briarleaf nodded and padded off. Stopping to pick up some herbs, she headed to the nursery.

“Hi, Briarleaf,” mewed Raincloud. “Come to check on the kits?”
“Yes,” Briarleaf replied. It’s almost leaf bare and I need to make sure the kits are healthy and prepared for the cold weather.” Raincloud dipped her head in acknowledgement. Shiningpelt nosed her sleeping kits.
“Get up, you three,” she meowed. “Look who’s here.” Sunkit, Mistkit, and Whisperkit squirmed sleepily, but jumped to their tiny paws when they saw Briarleaf.
“Briarleaf!” squealed Mistkit. She jumped onto her back and clung on to her fur with her small, soft claws.
“I saw her first,” declared Sunkit. Whisperkit glared at him.
“No you didn’t!” he growled. “I did!” Briarleaf had noticed throughout the days that Whisperkit wasn’t a lot like the other kits. He was sort of darker and a little unfriendly. Briarleaf half wondered if he would make a good medicine cat. Maybe, she thought.
“So are you missing Thistlepaw and Bubblepaw yet?” she asked.
“A little,” admitted Sunkit. “But we’ll be seeing them soon.”
“We’re going to be warriors!” squeaked Whisperkit, excitedly. He clawed the air and then jumped on Sunkit. The two tumbled into a playfight.
He’s a talented fighter, thought Briarleaf. Maybe he should be a warrior after all.
Suddenly, Briarleaf heard a yowl.
“Briarleaf!” It was Moonblaze. “Shadowtail was attacked by a fox!”
“Shadowtail?” Shiningpelt gasped. Shadowtail was her kits’ father. Gathering up her herbs, she dashed for the medicine den.
“Wait!” It was Mistkit. “Can I come? I’ve always wanted to see the medicine den, but Shiningpelt never lets me”
Shiningpelt snorted. “The medicine den is full of fragile herbs and you could destroy them! Imagine how much trouble that would be for poor Briarleaf!”
“It’s fine with me, if it’s okay with your mother,” Briarleaf replied. Mistkit was sweet and quiet. She would be no trouble. Mistkit looked at her mother pleadingly. Shiningpelt sighed.
“All right, you can go,” she mewed reluctantly. Mistkit squealed with delight and followed Briarleaf out into the clearing.

Shadowtail lay in the medicine den, groaning.
“Seapelt, Shalepaw, and Shadowtail, and I were out patrolling,” Moonblaze explained. “That’s when we met the fox! We gave it some good scratches. It won’t be back for a while.”
“Good,” said Briarleaf. “Foxes might get the kits, or destroy the camp.” She circled Shadowtail cautiously. The dark warrior was covered in scratches, with a deep gash down his side. He had torn a claw too, and his fur was matted with blood. Briarleaf shuddered at the thought of a fox lunging at him, eyes gleaming with fury. Chewing up some dock leaves, she carefully applied the ointment to his wounds, and put some cobwebs on them. I’ll need burdock root, she thought. Mouse dung! They’re in the herb store and I don’t want to leave Shadowtail!” The warrior was bleeding hard and Briarleaf was afraid he was going to loose to much blood. “Mistkit!” she called. The little white kit had been quietly sitting at the side, watching with wide eyes. “Can you go into the herb store and get me some burdock root? They’re…they’re dark coloured and…” Briarleaf trailed off. How could she describe burdock root? Mistkit scrambled up and hurried into the herb store. She came out, gripping something in her teeth. “Is this it?” she asked.
“Yes, it is,” said Briarleaf, relieved. She applied the burdock root to Shadowtail’s gash. He winced.
“It stings!” he complained.
“For StarClan’s sake, Shadowtail!” Briarleaf hissed. “Stop acting like a kit! Do you want to heal or not?” Shadowtail shrunk down.
“Sorry, Briarleaf,” he muttered. Briarleaf sighed.
“It’s fine. I’m just tired. Everything’s hard when its leaf fall.” Shadowtail nodded.
“It’ll get easier in newleaf. For all of us.”
Briarleaf glanced at Mistkit. Maybe things will get easier.